tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1353442043392852653.post7685007286309895760..comments2023-05-05T10:24:57.214+01:00Comments on NaPo-Kapow! : Day 5: EasterSiobhánhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/11146329432858420431noreply@blogger.comBlogger3125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1353442043392852653.post-17214221378601700222015-04-09T11:29:24.868+01:002015-04-09T11:29:24.868+01:00Thanks Cheryl - yes I was thinking it was *glad! :...Thanks Cheryl - yes I was thinking it was *glad! :)<br /><br />You know I'm finding that I usually have 2 or 3 ideas buzzing around my head each day and I'll write a few different ones and then decide on what poem feels the most finished to post. But I'm just loving the inspiration NaPo creates. It makes poetry more fun - and takes the solemnity out of writing it. Not so much worries about perfection or block - just a go with the flow vibe! :)Siobhánhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11146329432858420431noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1353442043392852653.post-13158749699274751362015-04-08T12:24:41.969+01:002015-04-08T12:24:41.969+01:00*"light, and sweet, and GLAD, that was meant ...*"light, and sweet, and GLAD, that was meant to say!Cherylhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03035560366555484918noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1353442043392852653.post-66577206916908137292015-04-08T12:24:02.639+01:002015-04-08T12:24:02.639+01:00You've done brilliantly to catch up after the ...You've done brilliantly to catch up after the Bank Holiday! (I'm going to have to start doing more than one poem each day, I think. I'm on holiday from the 17th-27th ad it's unlikely I'll get anything done poetry-wise then).<br /><br />This is light, and sweet, and lad - I like the descriptions you use in stanzas 1,2 & 4 very much, but stanza 3, in all its simplicity, is my favourite. That repetition of 'yellow' is just magic, implying warmth and containment and absolute yellowness from the inside out.Cherylhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03035560366555484918noreply@blogger.com